This is a terrific first draft! I am impressed with how quickly you pulled this together! You seem to have most of the items covered; however, most need further expansion. You should only be completing sections 1-3...as section 4 and 5 are reserved for after you have conducted the study. Also, the checklist is attached with my comments. I had to remove the text you placed there...because that is suppose to be used for comments. I focused on reading section 1..since that needed some significant work. I would recommend that you read through completed PAS that are found on Walden's web link I provided in the feedback...this will help you see the level of detail that is needed, especially in reference to how you complete section 3 that focuses on your method.